Monday, May 13, 2013

Change in story

I did not like when Gulliver was using the ship, that he received from the king of Brobdingnag, to go back home, that he magically got back to his homeland by a sudden monsoon. This is because it seemed way to convenient that he got home quickly by a suddenly appearing monsoon. I would simply put a part in the book where he is struggling through adversity, and then transition to a monsoon.

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